Tears
Diamonds, Crystals
Searing, Stinging, Cleansing
Washing clean the heart.
Renewal.
*****
Laughter
Energetic, enthusiastic
Bubbling, Bursting, Floating
Life’s most magic elixir.
Joy
***
Voice
Honest, Firm
Calming, Empowering, Steadying
Infused with heart authenticity.
Strength
Written as a part of One Shot Wednesday! Click Week 17 and check it out!
11 comments:
nice. each of these is a journey...a renovation of what we hold inside...nice form as well. nice one shot!
I like how the first two, tears and laughter, are expressions of the third. Also, how you tied tears to the cleansing and renewal of the heart--this is something we should all do regularly. And laugh as well! :) Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful. Love and Light, Sender
Love the form and message in this poem, renewal, joy, strength...now just to remember it and live it. :)
I love these TE! So much in so few.
Thank you, I can use all of these today. :) Lovely writing ~April
Excellent cinquans.
i've tried them before so i understand how difficult they can be.
You did really well
Re-energies, joy and strength.. all are beautifully formed in this one shot.. I liked it.. thanks for sharing...
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tears laughter and voice, together can be therapeutic!
To the emotional point, a most welcome approach, this late in the list. Strong work.
Thanks for the excellent cinquans
each with their own voice - spoken as one
thanks for sharing with One Shot
hope you have a great weekend
moonie smiles
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