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Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Cinquain Poetry in Threes

Tears
Diamonds, Crystals
Searing, Stinging, Cleansing
Washing clean the heart.
Renewal.

*****

Laughter
Energetic, enthusiastic
Bubbling, Bursting, Floating
Life’s most magic elixir.
Joy

***

Voice
Honest, Firm
Calming, Empowering, Steadying
Infused with heart authenticity.
Strength



Written as a part of One Shot Wednesday!  Click Week 17 and check it out!

11 comments:

Brian Miller said...

nice. each of these is a journey...a renovation of what we hold inside...nice form as well. nice one shot!

Melissa Campbell said...

I like how the first two, tears and laughter, are expressions of the third. Also, how you tied tears to the cleansing and renewal of the heart--this is something we should all do regularly. And laugh as well! :) Thanks for sharing.

senderupwords said...

Beautiful. Love and Light, Sender

Terresa said...

Love the form and message in this poem, renewal, joy, strength...now just to remember it and live it. :)

Belinda said...

I love these TE! So much in so few.

betweenhearts75 said...

Thank you, I can use all of these today. :) Lovely writing ~April

Arts Web Show said...

Excellent cinquans.
i've tried them before so i understand how difficult they can be.
You did really well

Shashi said...

Re-energies, joy and strength.. all are beautifully formed in this one shot.. I liked it.. thanks for sharing...


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Mona said...

tears laughter and voice, together can be therapeutic!

Steve said...

To the emotional point, a most welcome approach, this late in the list. Strong work.

moondustwriter said...

Thanks for the excellent cinquans

each with their own voice - spoken as one

thanks for sharing with One Shot
hope you have a great weekend

moonie smiles