Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Cinquain Poetry in Threes

Diamonds, Crystals
Searing, Stinging, Cleansing
Washing clean the heart.


Energetic, enthusiastic
Bubbling, Bursting, Floating
Life’s most magic elixir.


Honest, Firm
Calming, Empowering, Steadying
Infused with heart authenticity.

Written as a part of One Shot Wednesday!  Click Week 17 and check it out!


Brian Miller said...

nice. each of these is a journey...a renovation of what we hold inside...nice form as well. nice one shot!

Melissa Campbell said...

I like how the first two, tears and laughter, are expressions of the third. Also, how you tied tears to the cleansing and renewal of the heart--this is something we should all do regularly. And laugh as well! :) Thanks for sharing.

Anonymous said...

Beautiful. Love and Light, Sender

Terresa said...

Love the form and message in this poem, renewal, joy, just to remember it and live it. :)

Belinda said...

I love these TE! So much in so few.

Anonymous said...

Thank you, I can use all of these today. :) Lovely writing ~April

Arts Web Show said...

Excellent cinquans.
i've tried them before so i understand how difficult they can be.
You did really well

Shashi said...

Re-energies, joy and strength.. all are beautifully formed in this one shot.. I liked it.. thanks for sharing...

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Mona said...

tears laughter and voice, together can be therapeutic!

Steve said...

To the emotional point, a most welcome approach, this late in the list. Strong work.

moondustwriter said...

Thanks for the excellent cinquans

each with their own voice - spoken as one

thanks for sharing with One Shot
hope you have a great weekend

moonie smiles